The light crept eerily towards the group, snaking over the forest floor. They stood silent, almost as if they would be passed, unnoticed. Rory felt an arm graze hers and moved her head ever so slightly to the left. Anna looked at her apologetically, and she breathed a sigh of relief. Patty shifted her weight, a twig cracking like a spine beneath her boots. Everyone jumped, eyes darting around, startled by the sudden noise.
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