David’s father told him to wait in the store, and all colour washed from the young man’s face. There was never a time when his father had left him alone, so he knew something was amiss this time.
As the young boy looked out of the window, he could see the angrily grey balls of condensation coming towards them. It looked like a warrior charging into battle and certainly looked like it was ready to win.
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