The water sparkles playfully in the shining sun, sending sparks of glittery liquid bouncing off the surface. The trees wave peacefully in the Spring breeze, their bark almost smiling as they creak. The snowy mountains loom over the valley like Greek Gods, protecting their home from invaders. The silence feels homely, and Florence digs her feet into the warm sand. It tickles her toes, whilst a smile tugs at her lips.
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