“It’s alive!” Liam gasped as he put the finishing touches on his school project.
“It looks alive alright but more dead than alive”, James, his cousin, laughed.
“What do you mean?” Liam joked, “It has got eyes and ears and a mouth.”
“Yes, exactly that. It looks a bit too human” James shook his head. “What if he gets up in the middle of the night and does something to you?”
“Why would that even cross your mind. You are watching way too many movies” Liam rolled his eyes.
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